AnR7 Reupload

Hey, this is really nice! I love the shading/lighting in the piece (and the soft shine it creates makes the scene look heavenly, like Haru is an angel coming to save Tokaku). Also drawn really well, great anatomy, and I really like the way you do their hair.

My only critique would be making it look more like they're in water, would help make the scene feel more real and put the viewer in it more.

Putting my two cents into the scene, while she was giving Tokaku air there does leave the question if that was her only intention (considering the fact that she wouldn't really have a ton of oxygen herself the kiss lasted longer than it would have if she just breathed some air in, and it kinda looked like Tokaku was pulled in some when it cuts to the side) So there is room for speculation on that moment -shrug-

But yea, you do a great job capturing this moment